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Prologue Draft Long, long ago, there was a place called ______. In this world, were many lands, creatures and races. The lands were governed and created by many, many gods. It was first created by one powerful mother goddess, who then created the base of the world and all other gods. She sent these gods to flourish the lands with life.Each land had a patron god as its protector. But despite the protection of these gods, evil still had a strong grip on the world. Every day, people feared the threat of a demon coming for there souls, land, food and family. The possibility of a war between the gods and demons also lingered in the mortals minds. One day, the gods decided to stop the evil of the demons once and for all. Together, the gods created a barrier between the world of mortals and the world of demons. The mortals were free from the harm of the demons for a many years to come.But, after time had passed, something worse threatened the world. The barrier the gods created was so powerful; it threa